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NaNo: Day #1

Sheep

“Readers are not sheep, and not every pen tempts them.” -Vladimir Nabokov


NaNoWriMo isn’t for everyone. It’s not even for every writer. In fact, only 16% of the people who sign up actually reach the goal of 50K words in 30 days. And that’s perfectly fine, because for some people that’s simply not a useful goal. For most genres, 50,000 words isn’t even considered novel length!

I have a problem with editing as I write. A very bad habit as it turns out, because it ends up leaving me stuck trying to find the exact right words instead of moving forward with the main concept of what I want to write. I end up getting lost in the details and minutia and the overall story arc gets lost. So my goal for this year’s NaNo is to break myself of the editing habit, and that’s all it is is a habit. I don’t need to do it, and it’s holding me back.

I started my NaNovel this morning, and before I’d finished the first paragraph I’d already backspaced and deleted and changed words several times. That’s when I came up with my NaNo Rules for Nicole, of which there are only two, and they’re dead simple. Or should be…

Rule #1: No backspacing. Fixing spelling errors doesn’t count. Deleting entire words is a no-no.

Rule #2: No deleting anything! Be it one word, a phrase, or an entire paragraph. Leave it alone! If I want to add more to it, even if it’s repetitious, that’s fine. I can edit out the shit and leave the good parts next month.

That’s it. Those are my rules for this year, and if I can keep to those for the entire month, whether I get to 50K words or not, I’ve won NaNo based on my own goals for it. Of course I DO want to hit the 50K mark too. After all, that’s part of the fun of the month! The challenge of reaching a solid word goal.

So less than a day into NaNo, and I’ve passed my daily word goal of 1,667 words by 168. Now I can take a break and write here and on ER. Then I’ll take a break to think about what I’ve written o far and where I want to go from there before I sit down again tonight and write some more, because I can’t wait to see how the story’s going to unfold! (I’m half in love with my main character already.)

How’s your writing (NaNovel or not) coming along? What challenges are you facing? Where do you get stuck? What gets you excited to sit down and get back to it?

Do you NaNo?

nano_09_blk_participant_120x240_pngIt’s that time of year again. The time when temperatures begin to dip into the 70s, you can buy a pumpkin spice latte at Starbucks, and when once again I start to thing about things like plot devices and character names. Yes, it’s almost time for NaNoWriMo.

Now I’ve been a participant in National Novel Writing Months every year since 2002, so this will be my seventh attempt, and this time I plan to win. No, I’ve never won. In fact, if I were to take a wild guess, I’d say my best attempt was probably in 2005 when I might have broken the 10,000 word ceiling. Maybe.

Why then, after so many failed attempts, do I think this will be the year that I finally reach the allotted 50,000 words? Well, there are actually a few reason. You may even share one or two, and if so maybe I can inspire you to join me in my November task. So sit down, pull up a stool, and let me share my reasons why this year is different.

I have an incentive!

In my annual surfing around the NaNoWriMo website, I came across a section I’d never noticed before called Special Offers. The first thing that caught my eye was the 50% off Scrivener software offer. Now I’ve been eyeing this software now for the past year but could never bring myself to shell out the $40 or so to buy it, and frankly I had no reason to. I wasn’t writing anything that necessitated such a lovely tool, but boy I still wanted it. The offer is that all NaNoWriMo winners this year will be able to buy Scrivener for half price. That’s $20! So for me, that’s a great incentive. My bribe to myself if I win will be to finally buy a piece of software I’ve been pining away for.

I have new tools!

ScrivenerTitleAND, as if that weren’t enough, they’ve also created an offer just for participants which lengthens the time limit of their free trail period from only 30 days all the way to December 7th. That means, even if you don’t want to buy the software, you can use it for the entire month of NaNo (plus an extra week after) free of charge! How cool is that??(Sorry Windows folks, this is a Mac only perk. :()

I have people!

I have the most NaNo buddies every this year, that will be writing along with me. Sure, I’ve had buddies before – okay, well only last year and that one year when Michelle kicked my word count’s ass – but this year I have more buddies than ever. Still, while the quantity is great to have, it’s the quality of this year’s bunch that excites me! Most of these people were my buddies last year as well, and MAN they are INTO this! I swear one of them may even have written three or four novels during the month last year. So this year I’ve surrounded myself with people who are excited to write and who write damned well on top of it. Nothing like a little competitive spirit to get the blood and fingers pumping, eh?

I have faith!

Before when I would sit down to start writing my NaNovel, most of the excitement wore off as soon as I saw that blank page staring at me. Who did I think I was kidding? Write a novel? Me? HA!! Anything I put down on that stark page was going to just come out sounding awkward and trite. That’s no longer an issue. Why, you ask? Because for the past year and a half I’ve been practicing. Not only practicing, but writing with other people. Real writers! Yessiree, and I’ve been holding my own too. I don’t suck! So this time when I sit down to that page, I’ll have already made it past that huge first stumbling block.

So this year, during the month of November, I’m going to paint a beautiful picture with (at least) 50,000 words. I’m going to paint my characters in vibrant hues, I’m going to spackle them with bright colors, and then I’m going to hurt them and heal them and watch them grow. I’ll build their world and their story word by word and page by page.

I have a database!

Or rather I will. Like I did in 2005, I’m going to publish my writing here on the site as I go along. It’ll have a dedicated page complete with a running wordcount tally and everything! (Yeah, my Geek is showing. I know.) Anyway, stay tuned for that excitement. In fact, why don’t you join me in my wordy adventure? You know you want an excuse to not have to do the dishes for an entire month!

“Sorry, honey. I’m writing my novel.”

A Place in My Mind

www.flickr.com/photos/58778424@N00/Ahhh… Sunday morning in Houston, Texas. Supposedly the temperature outside is 71°F, but inside it’s a nippy 65°F. Yes, nippy, damnit! I didn’t move south to feel chilly.

The thing I like most about living in Texas (over Florida) is that there’s more of a change in seasons here. Leaves actually do fall from trees, and there’s a real possibility (though not probability) of snow once in awhile. This is a good thing in that it allows me to edge my way into feeling… let’s call it homey.

This is the time of year when instead of clicking through the holiday tunes that are always on my iPod, I let them play out. It’s also the time of year I think more and more about my island home in Sault Ste. Marie, Michigan. Sugar Island is where Mum grew up, and where I spent every single summer of my own childhood.

So why do lower tempuratures in Texas remind me of a summer place in Michigan? Ha! You jest. I said it was in the 70s and chilly here. 70° a perfect summer day Up North. The chilly feeling reminds me, not of the summers we spent almost entirely in the water, but the winters when we would visit my grandma on the Island.

Gram heated her house with a kitchen wood stove. The chimney ran up through the middle of the house, and on chilly mornings I can remember running to press my body against that upstairs brick wall before making the mad dash down to the warmth of the kitchen.

In the living room there was a second wood burning stove that was only fired up during really cold weather. It would blow hot air out from the bottom, and after breakfast you could almost always find me sitting in front, toes tucked under the edge. Someone was always telling me to get back before I burned myself.

We have nothing like that here, unless I count the puny gas fireplace that does nothing but draw what heat we do have right up the chimney. I can almost see the dollar signs as they float up and away. No, instead of snuggling around a smoky smelling wood stove, here I huddle next to my electric stove for the few minutes it takes to make my morning coffee.

As the water heats enough to boil up and collect in the reservoir, I cup my hands over the burner as if it were a tiny bonfire. If I close my eyes and focus on the warmth permeating my hands, I can almost remember the feeling of cold mornings at Grandma’s Roy’s. It’s one of my favorite memory places.

Gary: 2002

I wrote the following in two separate mini writing sessions in the summer of 2002. I thought I’d post it here and maybe inspire myself to dig a little deeper into Gary’s story. What do you think?

The tree was a huge, clawing thing. Its inky, leafless branches snaked out Medusa-like from a trunk more than twenty feet across. After Gary got over its sheer size, it was obvious that that was not all that made the tree unique. The surface was a shiny black, or was it silver? As he moved around it seemed to change with the light. It reminded him of hematite. Gary wondered if maybe it was formed of stone. It surely wasn’t alive, was it?

“What the…?”

He approached it from the road side, since coming at it from the opposite side would involve climbing a good hundred feet or so of sheer rocky cliff. The cobbled road led right up to the base of the tree and stopped there, wrapping slightly around tits base at the edges, the stones buckled where it met the tree, as if it had sprung up just moments before in the center of the path. Of course, the road ending at the bottom of a steep drop would seem almost as strange he supposed.

There was writing on the trunk. Or no, it was gone again. A trick of the light? The surface was extremely reflective. In fact Gary could see a dark image of himself as he moved around it. Carefully he reached out a hand to touch what he supposed should be the tree’s bark, expecting the shiny darkness to feel cold to the touch, but it was not. He jerked back as he felt the almost pulsing warmth beneath his fingers.

Eyes wide he reached out again and this time, as his fingers trailed across the smoothness, golden writing appeared under his touch, only to fade as his fingers moved on. At least he assumed it was writing, although he’d never seen anything like it before.

He rested his palm flat against the tree and the golden words flowed outwards from his hand. This time they did not disappear, but wrapped themselves around the tree and up into the branches until the tree shimmered with them. Gary, staring up into the tree, forgot about his hand against it and let it drop to his side. As soon as he did, the writing completely vanished, leaving Gary blinking up into the black branches.

Gary looked from his hand to the tree and back again several times before his brain began to process what had just happened… what he’d just discovered. Once his synapses started sparking, it was all he could do to just stand there and stare as the entire plan began to click into place in his mind. It was all making sense. He could hardly believe that this.. thing.. was what he had been searching for the entire time, and to stumble across it like this, well it was beyond believing.

Once his mind slowed to a reasonable pace and Gary could focus, he again lifted a palm and placed it flat against the side of the tree. Again he watched in awe as the golden symbols spread from his fingertips to cover the warm, dark surface. They wrapped around the trunk and snaked up into the branches until even the tiniest twig of a limb was shimmering gold and black. Then, all at once, it seemed as though the end of each and every branch burst into its own small flame. It looked to Gary as if, having nowhere else to go, the writing simply exploded from the ends of each branch, creating fiery leaves that flickered silver-gold.

This time when he lifted his palm from the side of the glowing tree, the words did not fade, but continued to writhe serpent-like across the inky surface. The tree had virtually transformed in minutes from a dead looking thing into something that literally sparked with life from every branch. Still amazed and staring up into the flickering “leaves”, Gary didn’t hear the man approaching until he spoke from directly behind him.

Mum & Dad go boating

Life with my parents has never been dull, and apparently some things don’t change with age. I grew up thinking vacations were spent on a 27″ cabin cruiser tied to some cliff in Ontario. Staying in a hotel was something entirely foreign to me until at least my teens, and even then it only happened once every few years and was always tied in with some meeting Dad had to attend for school.

When Dad retired, ten or thirteen years ago now (I’m bad with dates), they sold the old wooden boat (the “Nicole”. Gotta love that!) and bought a fiberglass Searay monstrosity. Thankfully I had already moved away, so I’ve never had to deckhand on the narrow, badly designed beast. Alas, that left Mum as sole deckhand having to navigate the narrow sides of this monste… but I digress.

A couple weeks ago, Mum and Dad (M&D) took off on a little jaunt to Richard’s Landing, Ontario (a frequent weekend destination for them). About two hours into the three hour tour (yes, I just said that), Dad noticed he was having to throttle up more and more to keep the same speed. This, of course, happened in Lake George just about the same place our old boat sank when I was seven.

By the time they made it through the rapids not far from their destination, they were at full throttle and barely making headway, but they somehow managed to avoid the rocks. The engine finally died all together just yards from the marina, and they coasted the last several feet. Apparently Dad, all 5′6″ and 70 years of him, lept the last few.

Apparently something had broken, and water was being pumped into the bilge rather than out of it, slowly sinking the boat. So they called the local boat fix-it guy who came down to the dock with his little toolbox and fixed the problem after several trips back and forth the 30+ miles to get parts. Dad, of course, made fast friends, and the man (and his dog) ended up hanging with M&D on the docks, drinking into the late evening. That’s my Dad… making friends with everyone.

Now a lot of people would be wary of taking off in a boat that had all but landed at the bottom of the river three days before. Not M&D. They waved goodbye and started their merry way back upriver. Now the trip back takes them through the shipping channel. This means they’re in hundreds of feet of water with 1,000 foot freighters sharing the waterway. It can be quite dangerous if you don’t know what you’re doing, or are incapacitated somehow. You see where this is going?

An hour or so from home, the engine died. Kaput. Nada. The current in the channel is fierce, but luckily no freighters in sight to drag them into their wake. Finally Dad finally resorted to calling in a Mayday to the local Coast Guard (ah the memories). They tell M&D that they’ll be along as soon as they can get there, and to sit tight. So my parents drift until they’re outside the boundaries of the shipping channel, and throw out an anchor to await rescue. An hour and a half later said rescue appears to tow them to the nearest marina.

Now I’m just guessing here, but knowing my parents as I do, they likely passed the time having an afternon drink and some snacks.